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Dear Yang Hui,
I heard you'll have a two-week summer holiday and decided to visit as much new places as possible. I don't think it's a good idea. My friend Li hua went to Europe last July. He visited four countries, and stayed for only three days in each of the country. He was always in hurry. Li hua was either on a train or a bus almost every day. When he returned from Europe, he was very tired. So I suggest you to travel one country and to visit only one city. If you choose a city on the coast, you'll be able to have a good rest at the seaside.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Feng
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Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the zoo with Lily.There (was改成were) lots of people there. I found a girl (cry改成crying) in the zoo. She was lost and she (can’t改成couldn't) find her mother. We decided to help her. I (try改成tired) my best (加入to) find the broadcasting station in the zoo. (On改成At) the same time Lily played with her and looked after her (careful改成carefully) there. The little girl stopped crying and played with Lily. At last (his改成her) mother came. That made me feel very (happily改成happy). I thought I really did a good thing. If everyone helps (去掉with) each other, the world will become more beautiful.
